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Edi's avatar

Ah Mavis!!! What a great ending.

Btw you have just the right amount of woo woo, and I'm sure we could swap stories on that subject πŸ˜‰

Mary Ann's avatar

Haha thanks Edi xo!

Larry Koenigsberg's avatar

"it’s orienting to be briefly disoriented" is a profound perception. This disorientation is at the heart of much great art, music, literature, theater, even fashion. They orient us by knocking us off center, and then we see things differently as we re-center ourselves.

Mary Ann's avatar

It is at the heart of all those things!

Corbin's avatar

holy fuck that was breathtaking! and Spice would make such a fabulous hawk, the kind that steals food off a picnic table right in front of you! breathtaking. I will have to sit with it a while: equally as compelling an invitation as it is a whistling revelation. nicely done.

Mary Ann's avatar

Whistling revelation! What a great title!

appleton king's avatar

So many disparate feelings and images! always heartening